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point of view-help please
'Hello,' she says, throwing crumbs to the swans, while her auburn hair splayed about her face in the wind.
I move a few steps away; picking up a small piece of bread from the ground.
'Share mine,' she says,offering the paper bag, moving closer.
I feel I should be saying 'he' instead of 'I' but it came natural to say 'I' or am I going bonkers after writing all day,
and this being my last 500 word story?