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My cliched Valentine's message

edited February 2017 in Writing
To me you are a thousand stars,
and a dozen fragrant petals.
The world’s richest golden bars,
diamonds and precious metals.

To me you are the evening sun,
and the best of vintage wine.
To me you are the only one,
please be my Valentine.

Comments

  • edited February 2017
    Lovely! Valentine Day was invented for cliches, so go for it. Hope it's apprecciated.
  • In the interests of romantic balance:-

    I love you like I love my dog
    Make what you will of that.
    I haven't even got a dog -
    I much prefer my cat.
  • Another bah-humbug day. sponsored by florists, chocolatiers and the greetings card industry.

    My wallet is well buttoned
  • ...sponsored by florists, chocolatiers and the greetings card industry.
    Like birthdays, Christmas, retirements, christenings, marriages?

  • My wallet is well buttoned
    Sounds more like your fly...

    From Lola

    My heart is full, my heart is true
    my love will never fail
    and all I have I give to you
    in the wag that's in my tail


  • Valentines are over-rated -
    they only go to prove
    that once a year someone remembers
    to buy a sign of love.

    Better far the daily cuppa,
    emptying the bins,
    complimenting your new hairdo -
    these are important things.

  • I literally beat my gf all other days of the year.
  • Beat her at being a complete goofball?
  • Nope, with a big stick - cos me buying a card/pressy for today means I only love her today.
  • edited February 2017
    I love you when you’re far away, I love you when you’re near,
    But have I ever told you, your burps all stink of beer?

    (Not directed at you, of course, br)
  • Bluebells are purple, daisies are white
    I wish you’d stop breaking wind in the night.

    (I've got loads of them, old romantic that I am)
  • Dearest OH, you can sleep if you like
    I'd rather have Poldark than you any night.
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