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edited March 2010 in - Writing Tales
Once upon a time a big fat man walked into a ....

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  • department store...
  • and made his way over to the...
  • sports department where he asked to try out the exercise bikes...
  • But the man said no because ...
  • they weren't insured for accidents, and he was sure that in this case...
  • the fat man would break the machine. So the big fat man...
  • went to the cafe for consolation, where he met
  • his big fat girlfriend. So they ...
  • (now we don't want to be seen as fatist here, we want the character to have a happy outcome even if he stays the same size.)
  • ate lots of cream buns and smiled and smiled and smiled ....
  • Suddenly a camera crew arrived and approached them with an offer of stardom
  • Sorry for going off thread but every time I see this thread title I think

    Once...

    There was this kid who, got into an accident and couldn't come to school but

    When...

    He finally came back his hair had turned from black into bright white.

    And the darn thing stays with me all day.

    mmm mmm mmm mmm etc :-D
  • :)
    It became a problem when he was doing cookery lessons...
  • Because everyone thought he was the flour and ...
  • edited March 2010
    he would get in to a terrible mess when they tried to rub the butter in to his hair.
  • Meanwhile, the girlfriend of the boy with the white hare....
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