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Improving my "litany against weakness"
I've been working recently on my Power Point presentation about self-improvement and motivation, and I thought it would be a good idea to share with my fellow students my litany against weakness, which is a short, rather simple internal prayer supposed to give me strength and help me regain my self-control in will-testing times. However, I'm not as yet fully satisfied with either its form nor content and hence am asking for your help - just post anything that comes to your minds with regard to the above-mentioned topic, anything that may improve, polish and enrich the following:
Litany Against Weakness
From me the oceans spring,
In me the sunlight rests,
Im only here and only now,
And I shall become whom I desire to be.
All feedback will be mightily appreciated! ;) Also, if you happen to know any motivational quotes, do not hesitate to share them. Thanks in advance to whomever finds time and MOTIVATION to help me.