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I have a story which was to be included in my ready-to-go new collection. It's all been proof-read and edited, but both proofreaders have said they didn't understand it. No one else has read it. I summarised it to my husband and explained the psychology behind it and he said it made sense - but he hasn't read it. Maybe the psychological aspect isn't clear in the text and is just in my head...
Is there anyone who would be interested in reading it and giving an honest opinion as to why it doesn't work - or indeed, if it does?
Whisper your email address and I will send it as an attachment. It's 1700 words.
Thanks. I would appreciate any feedback.
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Saves me from working
[-(
Hope that's cleared that up. :-??
"sobs"