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Using 'He' and 'She' a lot

edited December 2005 in - Writing Problems

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  • In my novel, I have fallen into a habit of starting a lot of the sentences with either 'He' or 'She'. It doesn't flow particularly well, and I was wondering if anybody else has had this problem before.

    Any help would be great.
  • Count yourself lucky! I write gay fiction, and can't get away with saying 'he' unless I want to confuse the reader!
  • I thought most sentences start with "the" :)))
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