'Nuff said

red-lucy

http://jakonrath.blogspot.com/2009/07/how-not-to-write-story.html



Tripped over this via 'Twitter' -made me laugh but pertinent as I'm trying to flex my writing muscle :)

ceka

He's definitely had enough of judging!

Phots Moll

I thought I could prove him wrong because I sold a story all about the weather - but I've checked and the first line doesn't include mention of weather.

Aha! Do insects count as animals? I wrote (and sold - twice) a story where the mc was an insect.

red-lucy

I think he must have been having a bad day ;)

Carol

A very bad day...;)

Phots Moll

Very, very bad.

I suppose if you do keep seeing the same problems over and over it will become annoying.

dora

All I want to know is, what IS that reflection in his glasses?