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It's great Codger. I'd transpose the penultimate two lines:She never would admit to painUnlike old Mrs Whats-her-name Who she described with little stealthAs much enjoying her bad health.Then all three lines to do with Mrs Whatsername are together. I hope you are going into retirement homes etc and reading these? Or would that be impossible for you?
Lol! You need to write a COPD rap then...
Talking in rhyme and rhythm to a musical beat. Mainly black performers until recently.
Yes, keep it up!