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Advice please. In my novel I mention four hotels that my chararcters stay at. One in London, three in Europe. I have used real hotels that exist and their names. Should I do this? Nothing bad or disparaging is said about the hotels, just basic description.
Change the name. But you can keep the description
A classic example is Midsommer Murders, or going back to my school days. As much as I hate football I remember Melchester United obviously you and I know who they are, and so did all others.
Half of the books I read use the real names and descriptions of hotels, possibly because it lends the feel of reality to the story. Having said that, very obviously the other 50% of books use invented hotel names and descriptions. It probably depends on what you are trying to show the reader as to why you choose to describe a real place or not. Is it for impact, reality back-up or some other reason?
I did read somewhere that it is ok as long as you don't suggest dodgy goings on ie, used for drug dealing or making porn films. And that if they are described in a good image they welcome the advertising or exposure. Anyone else on this?
I must add, the books where the real hotels and descriptions are used, the characters are very nearly always seriously wealthy and the hotels are put into the mix to underline that fact. They are always - without exception - described in a very positive light. You shouldn't have any problems if you are not disparaging the hotel.
I agree with Island Girl. Real places do give the story a realistic feel. If it enhances the story and there's nothing bad or disparaging I would go ahead.
In one of my novels, two characters who can't abide one another try to act civilised over afternoon tea at The Lanesborough in London. I've also written scenes based at The Hempel. No problem with using real locations, Marc. Personally I believe they add authenticity to the script.
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A classic example is Midsommer Murders, or going back to my school days. As much as I hate football I remember Melchester United obviously you and I know who they are, and so did all others.
Thanks again for your recent help.
Luv Kaz