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How to punctuate a list of questions
Any ideas how I should punctuate this? Question marks instead of commas or split to separate sentences?
All day she'd made the choices: where we went, which shops, in what order, what cloth, who would model the dress (her) and who would sew (me).
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Where shall we go? Which shops shall we visit? etc.
You are just making a statement.
"a broad piece of pleated cloth"
Fabric: cloth or material for making clothes, covering furniture, etc.: ... cotton fabrics. More examples. Linen is a coarse-grained fabric. The fibres are woven into fabric.
Ana's writing is superb.
The trouble is you can say anything in about a gazillion ways...
And everyone has different associations.