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Is there an alternative word?
Here are two consecutive verses from a different poem (from those some of you have seen). I am perturbed - yes, perturbed - that I have used the word 'coffee' twice in such proximity. I've tried to think of a coffee brand to replace one of them, e.g. Gold Blend, but the stress is wrong. Any ideas? Take it away, TBers...
Edited and magicked away...
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My job as arsey editor is done for the day
And, if you've ever spilt a drink, you do feel it get colder as it works its way down your body.