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This is the line:
'They each leaned back in their seats with a hand on their stomach.'
There are two people, but each uses only one hand and each has only one stomach...
My proofreader says it should be 'stomachs'.
Comments
It would help if they were cows.
'Each leaned back in his seat, a hand on his stomach,' - one person, one stomach.
'They both leaned back in their seats with their hands on their stomachs' - two people, two stomachs.
*wishes there was an acknowledgements section in book*