Seeking Feedback - New Audience

ablobofbrowngoo

Hello everyone,
I have recently launched a small website featuring short-fiction, graphic tales and illustrations. I'd be very interested to hear what some of you have to say. The writing veers towards the unconventional mind. Hope you enjoy it.

www.thecruelworld.com

Jay Mandal

Hi, Blob. Welcome to Talkback.

Stan2

Welcome Blob of Brown Goo!

Carol

Welcome Blob of.

Kangaroo

Hello, welcome to Talkback. :-)

Emma B

Hello Blob. Cool website. I loved the Experimenting on Animals cartoon.

Claudia

Hello Blob - had a brief (very brief) look at your website. You ask for our opinions: I have to say I immediately picked up on the spelling error - "nonsence" instead of "nonsense" - or is it deliberate and I have no sense of humour?

p.s. Welcome to Talkback! :)

flyingtart

Hello and welcome Blob! :-)

Jenny

Hallo BoBG!

dorothyd

welcome. No chance to look yet, as I am at work ...

Liz

Hi and welcome BBG.


'The state provided defence lawyer was crooked'. I enjoyed that story, but the comma you put after 'provided' in this sentence caused me to read it several times, before I realised it was a mistake!

ablobofbrowngoo

Thank you all for your comments. Any feedback would be appreciated.

Chippy

hello Blob and welcome to Talkback

I had a brief look at your website - it looks pretty good - I would have looked for longer but I got a driving lesson in 1/2 an hour...and i'm supposed to reading the highway code [it's not riveting]

Soobdoo

Hello and welcome to Talkback.
:)

lexia

welcome, blob. Just going to take a look at your site

scratch

Hi there ablo!

lexia

Very funny, blob. Just joined your face book group - I think I may live to regret it !! :)

Mutley

Welcome blob - no chance to look at the moment but I will try to come back to it in a day or two.

cooper

Hi Blob (thanks Jay for giving us the abbriviation) huge welcomes to TB. Too tired right now to check out your website but I will. Other Tbers have checked it and I gat the impression that it's pretty good.

caro

Welcome, brown blob of goo. Can I just ask, though, what made you want to choose that name? :-)

Wilts

Hi Blob. Welcome to Talkback. Will look at your Website tomorrow, only just picked up this thread

Misty

Hi Blob :)

Will look at your website shortly, got an eye on tennis at the moment...

Welcome to TB.

cooper

What tennis is that Misty?

Misty

cooper The US Open. Davydenko is playing at the moment. Well he was, he's just been put out in the fourth round by a qualifier. Giles Muller from Luxembourg.

ablobofbrowngoo

Thanks everyone - keep those comments coming. And if you like the site please mention it to others who'll be interested. I'll be updating again in just over a week.

aeschylus

Whoops Davydenko. Is that as in "unexpected defeats" Davydenko?

Misty

Blob, I now had a look at the site, very good. :) I added it to my bookmarks and I'll be looking out for new updates. :)

[quote=aeschylus]Whoops Davydenko. Is that as in "unexpected defeats" Davydenko? [/quote]

Yes. He should have won the match...oh well! ;)

HisanoXelax

Hello blob! Nice site.

Highland Midge

Hi Blob. Very smart site, the unusual set-up makes you explore a bit. Good luck with it.

Peter-CB

Blob, I like the layout of your site very much.. For some reason the front page reminds me of the interface on the old IBMs I used to work on at my elementary school. I nearly sputtered coffee all over my desk when I chortled during "The Mysterious World of Maggie G.." And "Jerry the Soul Eating Cow" reminds me, for some reason, of a cartoon we used to have over here (on Cartoon Network) called Cow and Chicken, in which a cow demon with horns did everything he could to torment an adolescent named Cow and her brother, Chicken. Who were, respectively, a cow and a chicken. I've bookmarked your site: keep it coming.

ceka

hup!

ceka

Can't find it.