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Need Ideas For This Chapter Of My Horror Novel
I am currently writing the first chapter of the new novel I am writing. The story line is that a 15 year old girl has nightmares while in a comma yet she doesn't know that to the end. The climax is she gets to scared she tries to kill herself and we see a glimpse of her at the hospital almost dying. A few nightmares later she awakens to her friends and family surrounding her hospital bed. and she discovers what happened. Please read the file attached as this is what I have done so far would love some ideas or improvements. I'm also not sure whether I should keep each nightmare as separate chapters.
Thanks for your help and support.