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Need Ideas For This Chapter Of My Horror Novel
I am currently writing the first chapter of the new novel I am writing. The story line is that a 15 year old girl has nightmares while in a comma yet she doesn't know that to the end. The climax is she gets to scared she tries to kill herself and we see a glimpse of her at the hospital almost dying. A few nightmares later she awakens to her friends and family surrounding her hospital bed. and she discovers what happened. Please read the file attached as this is what I have done so far would love some ideas or improvements. I'm also not sure whether I should keep each nightmare as separate chapters.
Thanks for your help and support.
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With all due respect, I have to echo what GeraldQ has said about the errors in your post as it doesn't inspire confidence.
You say: ' I am currently writing the first chapter of the new novel I am writing.'
Do you therefore have published novels that you could tell us about so that we know you're genuine?
If you're genuine you are very welcome, if not, not.
Would you like to leave an introductory post so that the members know a little bit about you?
We tend to get lots of spam which is why we are wary of clicking on links.
Hope you return to the forum.
Can you imagine if someone had taken the trouble to download and critique her chapter/s?