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I've started another novel and having decided to give two first person points of view, find myself head jumping. Given the action takes place in different locations and in different times before slowly coming together this feels OK, but I was wondering what people think of this type of scenario. There was a similar discussion on here once but I can't find it now.
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Fine if scene one is character one, then a couple of blank lines later on denoting the end of that scene before the next scene with character two's viewpoint.